At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support
Although it is generally agreed that financial support should be directed towards all activities at universities and colleges, the question remains whether it should be focused on classes and libraries or it should be equal for all kind of activities. Personally, I am prone to believe that classes and other related activities should have primary financing. I hold this opinion for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, organizing proper classes is the primary function of educational institutions. People attend universities in order to gain knowledge and skills necessary for their future career. This in turn determines the importance of organizing proper classes for students. Whereas, sports and social activities are of secondary importance, at least for the vast majority of students. For instance, in my university only few students were paying equal importance to classes and social activities. I think this is the case for all universities.
Additionally, gaining necessary knowledge and skills is impossible if the university does not provide proper library services. It is obvious that attending classes is only one step in gaining knowledge. Things that are taught in classes may be effectively understood and memorized inly if they are supported by examing the relevant literature. For example, when I was a student I was spending a lot of time in university library in order to understand and learn things that were necessary for my future career. I do not know any person who succeeded in his or her studying without attending library.
To sum up briefly, sports and social activities are important for young people who attend educational institutions. However, classes and libraries need primary financing because the we got to university to gain knolwedge and skills for our career, and because without attending libraries education will be incomplete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...ibraries need primary financing because the we got to university to gain knolwedge and...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'libraries'' or 'library's'?
Suggestion: libraries'; library's
...r career, and because without attending libraries education will be incomplete.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, may, second, so, whereas, at least, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99632923573 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4162406882 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309458828867 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094929744248 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795961078822 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193981476754 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586851204149 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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