Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors.
The university is very important part of the students life. While some of them spend more time in buying facilities other give money for hiring famous professors. I believe that the people who will study you are the most significant when you have to choose between several universities.
I have two reasons for that and I will explain in the next paragraphs.
To begin with the education is part of the students life. when someone choose university he is searching for good lecturers and develop after that. For example when I had to find the right university for me i started with rating of every university and it increased when the professor were popular. Nowday is the same, moreover if the universities attract more students they gain more from the fees and the funding for every student. In addition when the university has more money they can invest in the students facilities.
Second the popular professors are famous because they are prove themself with the knowledge they have.
I believe that if you have this kind of teacher there are more possibilities to learn, to develop yourself. The students of this professor have the opportunity to find the most wanted style and type of studying. Many of them after years working become popular and have founding in different part of science. For example in my group in the university was a man who now contribute to the implement of vary significant law in my country because of his ideas. Hi contributes to avoid the air pollution. In adition the university of Bangladesh public that 68 percent of their popularity and success are the teachers. they spend a lot of time for researching them. I think the right professor is lucky you found.
To sum up, I believe that the person who will teach you is the most important thing i your education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Suggestion: When
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80128205128 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65300796561 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503205128205 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.135188814 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8421052632 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199963680193 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608897573256 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103647028485 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920845473878 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106930880351 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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