A university education is essential to success in life.
In today's progressive world, people are always seeking a lot of ways to improve their lives more and more and there are a substantial number of people who are of the opinion that a university education plays a significant role towards individual's future life. I absolutely agree with this idea and I will cogently explicate my stance on this issue in what follows.
First and for most, there are lots of factors that guarantee the successful life but education is at the top of them because the highest paid people are those who know more than the average. They know more information than the average person in their field. As a result, they can make a more valuable contribution to a knowledge-based society and live the best life possible. They are valued more, respected more and ultimately paid more money and promoted more often. The rule is that, “to earn more, you must learn more.”
Secondly, due to advanced technology, most carriers need education to be occupied. So, if someone does not attend to higher education program, he definitely cannot obtain the knowledge of any job, and he fails in competition with others for future carrier. Subsequently, he loses his future because without job he will not be able to afford his life. A telling example is what my friend undergone when she refused to go to university. She unfortunately lost every job interviews because all employer hire not only skillful person but also they need to be sure about academic knowledge of their employee.
Additionally, people who are successful in their lives have a lot of contacts and university is the first real situation that people can create these links. Students make strong relationships with each other and with professors in order to get higher scores. So, they begin practicing of being effective for their lives.
To wrap it up, education is a key factor of being successful in life whether someone considers it as earning more money or getting higher social situation. That is why university education is really important for successful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to earn more, you must learn more.' Secondly, due to advanced technology, mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00579710145 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76062268286 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4402934298 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220315886381 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083431308439 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120653096137 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151017579164 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127116269679 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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