we have to be creative in order to succeed either in school or at work
Success at school or work is essential for better lives of the societies. This success is based on many factors that should be fulfilled. Some people argue that creativity is one of these factors, while others believe that it is all about hard work. In my opinion hard work is the most influential factor of any success. The reasons for this point of view are discussed in the following essay.
As a matter of fact, creativity is the result of hard work, but people don’t get chance to do their tasks in a creative way. Regardless of the workplace, people don’t do their work out of their minds. Each institution has specific procedures for each type of work that workers have to follow. Further, environment of workplace is not encouraging for creativity. Managers are strict about deadlines and people usually work in groups, so the decision should be unanimously be agreed on from all team members. It is worth mentioning that there are a lot of successful people in their jobs who are not creative, but they are hard worker.
In order for creativity to appear, the worker has to be working for his own not under supervision of somebody else. Creative ideas are hard to find, and even harder to apply in an already made system without dramatic changes in it. These ideas need a lot of thinking and huge mental effort, and may need financial support in addition. However, if found, creative ideas may lead to a giant leap into the business. For instance, the best solution is to compromise between hard work and creativity. Companies may introduce researching teams dedicated to find and test promising ideas, and to keep its progress should keep depending on hard workers as the main element of success.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that hard work is more important than creativity which might be the result of it too. So in order for a workplace to succeed, owners of it should depend in the first place on serious workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a creative way" with adverb for "creative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...don't get chance to do their tasks in a creative way. Regardless of the workplace, people do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79525222552 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62012931322 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8492055045 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0526315789 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248194761317 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727023974381 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603735399851 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154863402481 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269061493232 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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