What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?
No one can deny that there were many discoveries in the last century. Some of them have had some advantages, and other have had some disadvantages. If I were to choose the most beneficial findings I would like to talk about vehicles, telephone, and internet. And I will develop those in the following paragraphs.
First of all, at the beginning of the century, vehicles construction was one of the most important things that people could discover for many reasons. It is possible enumerate many positives attributes to cars. For example, commuting is easier than was in the past. In the past people in order to move from one point to another point used to use horses, bicycles or on walk. However, after cars have been built people changed those transport mediums for cars, that made more efficiently commute time.
Second, In the past, people used to communicate between each other through mailing. Mailing method had some disadvantages such as, time delivery or missing mail. Although, mail delivered do not disappeared at all, telephone discovery changed the play rules. Nowadays, almost anyone have a telephone, and it is a useful device when someone need to communicate some news to other person. For example, emergencies, great news or just to talk about nothing important, the fast way that people can make it is through phone communication.
Finally, the last invention that was made by people is the Internet. Definitely, the internet could be defined as the most important discovery in the last years. The internet provides a lot of positives benefits in different areas, such as work, communication, and computer games. It is possible enumerate endless applications, but If I choose one I prefer to talk about working benefits. For example, the network changed my business, I am a writer, and when I put my books into the internet I could sell them than ever I thought.
In conclusion, cars, telephone, and the internet are the most important discoveries made in the last century for all those reasons I have mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...the play rules. Nowadays, almost anyone have a telephone, and it is a useful device ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00882352941 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82054223112 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0332249391 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.15 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198091039938 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586377630196 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555792387436 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116322187629 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034229720896 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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