When you visit a strange city,guided tour or explore by yourself.
Currently, with the accumulation of material affluence, an increasing number of city dwellers are capable of affording trips to diversified places. Hence, it comes to the question that should we participate in a guided tour or explore the destination by ourselves. Personally speaking, I prefer to have a self-guided tour and my preference can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, it is more convenient to travel by myself. Nowadays, people are suffering from mounting pressure generated from excessive workload and depressed social network, thus traveling all by myself not only enables me to avoid the needless social interaction between participants from all walks of life but also guarantees that I can fully immerse myself with the local cultural ambiance, which contributes to my whole rejuvenation. Meanwhile, in a guided tour, people usually tend to wake up early and go back to the restaurant late at night to pay visits to all sightseeings the traveling agency plan to visit, which does make participants feel exhausted and fail to achieve their goals of refreshing themselves. Compared to the guided tour, in the self-guided tour, I can schedule my plan based on the information I amass from online forums, including which restaurant should I book, which sightseeing is worthy of visiting and so on. By taking consideration of all these listed stuff, I am capable of arranging my trip so as to ensure this trip rejuvenates myself instead of making me exhausted.
What’s more, directing the tour by myself is more economical. Currently, with the unprecedented boom the tourism has witnessed, some travel agencies, at the aim of reaping profits, tend to guide tourists to some local markets to persuade, or even force them to purchase something needless, which does cut in their budgets. In addition, during the guided tour, since the trip is beyond our control, we cannot avoid spending extra money in some places of interests that we are not fond of. Conversely, in the self-guided tour, through my pre-trip plan, I can save a lot of cost by considering varieties of factors, like making a reservation of restaurants in advance, booking tickets to well-known sightseeing worthy of paying a visit or arranging the best travel routine to save extra time and fees spent on traveling. By doing all these listed above, I can save lots of money, which can be distributed to purchase a bunch of souvenirs or upgrade the experience of traveling.
Admittedly, taking part in a guided tour renders us a trip without any consideration before the trip, for instance, it enables us to get rid of the process of searching for information or booking tickets. Nevertheless, these perks are outshone by advantages of a self-guided tour, since this kind of convenience is likely to offer us the unpleasant experience of traveling after starting the trips.
In a nutshell, due to the convenience and lower cost of a self-guided trip, I would like to reiterate my opinion that visiting a strange city by myself is the optimal option for me to make me relaxed in my limited budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1030, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 99.0 52.1666666667 190% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2578.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04500978474 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01547206823 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522504892368 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9935117911 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.125 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9375 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182908303636 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670425716264 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058109411438 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111283643551 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175697760988 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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