Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching
Though numerous entertainments approaches are avaliable owning to the developement of science and technology, such as singing in the KTV room, enjoy boating on the lake, skaiting, air-dirving, etc.
Especially, it is considerablely convenient for citizens of metropoliton to see a recentlly released film. Of course, we can also download some old film and enjoy at home on TV or laptop. But have we ever think about it is a film worth watching. we perhaps usurally ignore the value of the film. From my perspective, Imaintain that we are supposed to watch those movies giving us a lesson on real life.
First of all, movies related to real life always turn out to be a good film. People are likely curious about the life which differ from their own life, such as the famous film the speech of the King. However, these movies can not directly teach or enlight us in our daily life. Pepple in all walks of life experienced various affaira everyday, one movie less than 2 hours can not contain all real lives of the audiences, that is real is relatively real for the life only depicted during the film time, for others it is kind of strange, and it's nothing different from the life of King or Prince.
Secondly, there are many wonderful, miracle, epic films can discribe a buleprint for humman life. It would be disaster may happen in the future if we keep pollute the environment and over consume sources of this fragile planet, the film called 2012 tell us what would happen when the disastrous storm coming. Indeed, it is a science fiction film, except for the exciteingly visional effect, that absolutely warn us should not make matters worse continuely on our precious earth.
Finally, nowaday people are busy and overwelmed in work days, they do not have spare time keeping learning, so movies are alternative for them. It would be a win-win choice if they can absorb some nutricious to comfort their aloof heart while transfering themselves. What's more, on the other hand, the directer of the film company are encouraged to produce and compose desirable movies.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226130653266 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.138190954774 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103015075377 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0577889447236 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0628140703518 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118090452261 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0326633165829 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60820733206 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175879396985 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.00251256281407 0.00188951952338 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.0929648241206 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0251256281407 0.0209618222197 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100502512563 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2096.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 355.0 408.028673835 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90422535211 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323943661972 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242253521127 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149295774648 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101408450704 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60820733206 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 74.961409117 59.2087087015 127% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1875 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9843435502 48.84282405 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.644075263715 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 46.4128521127 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.45631067961 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221278575069 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0671128874292 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0434994149661 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525032191939 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17949506726 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859889187092 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772283866091 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264529897082 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0775959356307 0.067059652881 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119295868829 0.210909579961 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963831922633 0.0618886996521 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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