As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The ability of thinking in humans is what separates humans from the rest of living species although other can think it is not as efficient as the human brain. In the prompt, it is stated that if humans keep relying more on technology to solve problems their ability of thinking for themselves will definitely deteriorate. However, in my opinion, I moderately disagree with this statement is true to some extent for the following reasons.
First of all, What about the people who are helping in the advancement of technology? Are they not considered humans? Since it is these humans who are developing and furthering technological advancements and performing feats that were considered impossible in the past. As stated in the prompt the statement is not applicable when the above is true.
Lastly, It is not the humans as a whole that are subjected to deteriorating in the ability to think but the people who are influenced negatively by technology who lose the ability to think and reason under specific circumstances, even though they are negatively influenced they can still think of something and it can be fixed with help of time. If the above case is considered the prompt stating that the deteriorating of ability to think in humans does not hold water.
Of course, some might argue that the given statement is true. However, it is only to a certain extent that the given statement is true even though there are people who are negatively influenced by technology, as long as there are people who make further advancements in the technological fields the ability to think in humans might not deteriorate as they are trying to progress even further in the future.
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous Moreover the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men an 16
- The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette a local newspaper The primary function of the Committee for a Better Oak City is to advise the city government on how to make the best use of the city s limited budget However at som 58
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and sup 50
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address 50
- Describe a fear you had to overcome How did you overcome it 70
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al but boosting it in a certain manner. If this case is true the persuasiveness of...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...were considered impossible in the past. As stated in the prompt the statement is n...
^^
Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and it can be fixed with help of time. If the above case is considered the prompt...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, still, as to, for instance, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7984496124 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85759609066 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410852713178 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2360297088 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6428571429 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32561855958 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126427821786 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100993598069 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193420101978 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094246346427 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al but boosting it in a certain manner. If this case is true the persuasiveness of...
^^
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...were considered impossible in the past. As stated in the prompt the statement is n...
^^
Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and it can be fixed with help of time. If the above case is considered the prompt...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, still, as to, for instance, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7984496124 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85759609066 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410852713178 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2360297088 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6428571429 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32561855958 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126427821786 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100993598069 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193420101978 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094246346427 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.