Which is the most important thing for a country’s leader to assure the prosperity of a country?
A. Create more jobs
B. Increase agricultural production and lower food prices
C. Increase access to affordable houses.
Due to budgetary constraints, choices of governmental spending are limited, which requires national leaders to carefully plan whether to invest in the industry, agriculture or social services. My personal belief is that the government should invest more in creating jobs. Not only will it stimulate national economy, it will achieve this result inexpensively and effectively.
First and foremost, creating jobs for the unemployed will stimulate national economy. When the employment rate is low, consumption of consumer goods will be small, as a result of which production will be slowed down. Thus, if the government provides paid-jobs to the unemployed, economic development will be accelerated. Economic progress had been slow for decades in Chinese mountainous rural areas. To improve local economy, the government hired local people as construction workers in public facility building projects, such as roads, factories, and hospitals. As these projects came to a conclusion in the 2000s, not only did local people have greater buying power for goods imported from outside regions, but also these facilities made exchange with outside regions more convenient. As economic exchange took place, local economic condition greatly improved.
Furthermore, while building affordable houses also lessen economic pressure, it is much more costly than creating jobs. In contemporary society, housing price is high because land price has risen rapidly. If the government wants to provide cheap housing to the poor, it must buy high-priced land on a national scale, which adds to its financial pressure. Furthermore, it must also pay the salaries of engineers, construction workers, and the maintenance. Ordinary real estate developers can reap the profit from these investments by selling or renting houses at profitable prices, but the government cannot. In comparison, if the government chooses to create more jobs for the unemployed, it can make a small profit by selling the products manufactured in the factories or the services provided by these employees. Therefore, it is a much less expensive way to improve national economy.
Lastly, compared to increasing agricultural production, investing in the industry is a less time-consuming method to improve the economy. It takes at least one year to grow more food. In addition, bad harvest may occur due to environmental pollution or natural disasters, which prolongs this process. Furthermore, to actually lower food prices, the government has to increase agricultural production on a national scale, which can take up to decades. By contrast, once the workers get a small salary, consumption and production can be accelerated, and the government can use the profit to hire more unemployed to further economic progress. As such, it guarantees quicker results.
In conclusion, not only does providing jobs for the unemployed guarantees economic development, it is the quicker and cheaper method when compared to the other two. As such, it is my staunch belief that the governments should choose this method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2614.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57356076759 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03680578703 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53091684435 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9042493041 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.56 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.76 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17588685416 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473197462677 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471869751388 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935964490936 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439740019315 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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