When young people graduate from school, many people want to choose a less challenging and interesting job with more holidays in order to balance work and life. But now , more and more young people would like to choose a job which is interesting and full of challenges but with less rest period, which clearly indicates that people’s value of work has been changed.
Admittedly, some people may prefer a job with more vacation days because they concern it is unnecessary to word so hard and so tiredly. Only having enough relaxation and break, can we accomplish our work efficiently and correctly, even though the job isn’t as interesting and challenging as we think. This is a relevance of our responsibility.
However, for the young, we cannot only focus on pursuing for more opportunities to take a break. We should spare no effort to make great progress and continue improvement by doing challenging work on the ground that we are youthful and energetic. During the progress of finishing difficult project, which is also a progress of pushing our own limit, we are able to achieve precious experience so that we can go on solving various problems without fear in our future career and complete task without mistakes instead of having more rest. Furthermore, during the course of doing challenging work ,we are granted the chance to conduct self-assessment and discover our defects which is a critical step forward. In short, not only valuable working experience but also chance of self-evaluation are brought by doing challenging work.
In addition, doing an interesting work is also a determinant of happy life and impetus, which also guarantees correctness of our work. Just because we have more vacation days does not mean we will not feel boring. Suppose someone is always doing a job he dislikes, in long term, he will hate what he is doing, even worse he will hate his whole life and not to mention the working efficiency and correctness. Conversely, when we are doing something appealing to us, no matter how tired we are or how difficult the task is , we are encouraged to devote ourselves wholeheartedly to our work and our units. Moreover, as long as we have passion on our work, we can automatically continue studying in order to know more deeply about our job. The upside of keeping learning is that we will never be left behind and always keep pace with the fast-development of the society.
All in all, we are committed to choose a challenging and interesting job so that we can prepare for handling the next coming difficulties in our career and receive an overall feedback of our personal abilities with passions toward work. Nothings is more meaningful than having this kind of job to improve ourselves.
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- TOEFL T P O 49 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... order to balance work and life. But now , more and more young people would like t...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...ishing difficult project, which is also a progress of pushing our own limit, we are able t...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...stead of having more rest. Furthermore, during the course of doing challenging work ,we are granted ...
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Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing the course of doing challenging work ,we are granted the chance to conduct sel...
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Line 7, column 521, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ired we are or how difficult the task is , we are encouraged to devote ourselves w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89608665704 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504329004329 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6098209442 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193581447631 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756381730126 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568389671801 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142813497562 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533101359801 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.