Over the past few decades, it is indisputable that jobs have played pivotal roles in both individual’s life and it has been affected human life in several aspects. Job is one of the controversial issues in these days, some people believe that it is more interesting that to work for a company which is more challenging, however, as far as I concerned, I think it is better for people to work for a company which offers more vacation days. There seen to be numbers of benefits associated with these tasks, I would explore some of these benefits which are more conspicuous for me in the following essay.
First and foremost, working for company where offers you more vacation days will provide you opportunity to set up time to do some tasks which you like to do most, for instance, I want to do some yoga as permeant activity in my life which will affect my life in several aspects, although I can do yoga after the work time but I will not have sufficient energy in order to satisfy me, thus more vacation will provide me the opportunity to do some yoga which will help me regain my composure. And also statistic shows that people who do some yoga in their life are more likely to have higher productivity rather than people who do not some yoga in their spare time.
The second issue which deserves some words here is that in these day our lives become more complicated and more stressful due to lack of job progression and financial crises, and working for a company which is challenging can exacerbate the situation. My personal experience would be a great example of this problem, I used to work for a company which was really tough and stressful, I had to analysis countless data which was really tedious, in that time I was overwhelmed with my work so I couldn’t concentrate on my other tasks and my life became worse.
Finally, people tend to work for a company which has more vacation time because they think when they spend more time in vacation they will work harder in time off work and it will help society to prosper earlier. The statistic shows that going to a vacation is one of an effective and efficient way to get rid of stress and it will help co-worker to regain their composure and work harder.
To sum, due to aforementioned reasons I have discussed, I believe that working for a company which has more vacation days is more beneficial for both society and individual’s lives, in this way people help to society to prosper earlier and makes our life more delightful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ich deserves some words here is that in these day our lives become more complicated and m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, thus, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61521252796 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67472095671 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431767337808 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7607513689 48.9658058833 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 206.3 100.406767564 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.7 20.6045352989 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265704344355 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107844669838 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760815537686 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148796549442 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408644840357 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 11.7677419355 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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