Which one do you think is important to long – lasting friendship?
1. Help you when you need
2. Share same interest and hobby
3. Trust
Friendship is a holy thing that people should try to preserve it for long time, because having a friendship helps to people have good feel in the different situations. In modern society, that everything is machinery if everyone has a good friend can create a variety in life's people. In my opinion, different factors have effect on the friendship, which I will explore two of them in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays people have a lot of works that it causes they cannot see their friend's. By this matter each person can screen friends and through them selects real friends. Actually, when we have an actual friend we can have a feel luck. An example can drive this fact and notion home. Last week I had a serious problem with my wife, and we wanted to divorce. I called to my close friend and I asked him to help me. He was in the journey, but when understood that I have complication without delay he came back from his trip and came to our home. He tried to solve our problem and to some extent he succeeded. After day, I has realized that having a loyal friends, is the most thing in life, because a genuine friend can help in bad conditions.
Moreover, base of the relationship is the mutual trust. In other words, trust in the friendship has a significant role, and it can influence on the quality of relationship. To further illustration, I would like to speak about the personal history. When I went to the university I had a friend which ethically we like together. I thought our relationship were faithfully, but I mistook. One day I wanted to talk with my physical professor's and I asked him to care from my laptop. He accepted and I went to professor office and we talked for two hours, I came back from his office and I saw a thing which was more horrible for me. I saw he explored my laptop without any permit from me, Therefore, I disconnected our relationship and this event taught to me that I do not trust to anyone even close friend. As you can see, this history shows as well as a significant of the mutual trust, because without trust a friendship is nonsense.
In sum, having all reasons and examples into account, I believe that bases of friendship are two things. First, in every time friends try to help each other and second is the trust that has a determinant role in preservation a relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
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Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ke to speak about the personal history. When I went to the university I had a friend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5234741784 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66269210515 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7481079847 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7826086957 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13153274371 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361219972983 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403299144091 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793299367757 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349946332526 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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