Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends. a. joining a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling.
After switching into a new environment, such as new school or new university, students often eager to make friends because they are afraid of loneliness. There are many ways to make new friends, and as far as I am concerned, joining a sports is undoubtedly the best way to befriend with others. The reasons go as follows.
First and foremost, students need common topics to make friends and joining a sport team can give them common topics easily. For example, my brother was afraid of talking to others since he had few topics with others. It was not until his joining to the volleyball team that gave he many topics to talk about. Furthermore, since he had participated in many volleyball competitions, now he have a lots of experiences and stories to share with his friends. Also, he frequently watch a volleyball competition call SBL with his friends and discuss which player performs the best. Just after a semester, the number of his Instagram followers grow from 200 to 400, which makes he busy reply the inbox messages. Evidently, if he had not decided to be a part of volleyball team, he would not have so much topics to make friends. As a result, joining a sports team is indeed the best way to have common topics and make friends.
Besides, students are rather poor, and they can make friend with money in a sports team. For students, since they do not have work, they usually live based on the allowances given by their parents, which means they are often poor. Under such circumstances, joining a sports team is the most economical choice since it is usually sponsored by school. My friend David decided immediately to join the badminton team of his department after entering college. Luckily, the badminton team is sponsored by his department, so he join the team, meet many friends who are also very interested in playing badminton. On the other hand, if David choose to travel, he need to spend a large amount of money, and he had to work day and night to pay back the money he had spent. Consequently, joining a sports team is rather an economical choice than the other two.
Last but not least, students are busy and it is the easiest to spare some time to join a ports team. For instance, to graduate, college students need to take many courses and take enough credits. Suppose someone takes 20 credits in a semester, this means that he or she need to spend 40 hours in a week to studies, including reviewing and doing homework. To make friends on little amount of time, the rest of choices is to join a sports team, which only requires about 3 hours per week for regular practice. My friend David is also a busy student, and based on what he talked to me, he said that playing sports just like taking another 3-credits course; what make it special is you can also make many good friends there! On the other hand, either participating in local communities or traveling requires a lots of time to make friends. Indeed, joining a sports team is the best choice compared to the other two methods.
Based on the above reasons, I believe that the best way to make new friends is to join into a sports team. After all, shy, busy students need common topics to make new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
..., and as far as I am concerned, joining a sports is undoubtedly the best way to befriend...
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Line 7, column 390, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...in many volleyball competitions, now he have a lots of experiences and stories to sh...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ny volleyball competitions, now he have a lots of experiences and stories to share wit...
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Line 7, column 476, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...e with his friends. Also, he frequently watch a volleyball competition call SBL with ...
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Line 7, column 793, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...f volleyball team, he would not have so much topics to make friends. As a result, jo...
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Line 11, column 522, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'joins'.
Suggestion: joins
...m is sponsored by his department, so he join the team, meet many friends who are als...
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Line 15, column 805, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...local communities or traveling requires a lots of time to make friends. Indeed, joinin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, after all, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2646.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63397548161 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50147529935 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443082311734 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3930353534 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9615384615 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34615384615 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371371665689 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120031593716 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845193299409 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254940091144 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567258811473 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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