Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Extreme sports are becoming more common each year. Many people practice dangerous activities, and there may be many reasons to explain this risky behavior.
First and foremost, I believe people practice dangerous activities due to the excitement that these activities produce. There is even a physiological explanation for this pleasant feeling. Experts attribute it to the activation of two enzymes: cortisol and adrenalin. The former produces a sensation of cheerfulness while doing a pleasant activity, which may be risky. The latter is associated with a moment of intense action. For example, when a young man is doing snowboard, descending a hill at high speed, the enzyme called adrenalin is highly produced by the hypothalamus, creating a sensation of excitement in the man's body.
Second, some people want to show off their fearlessness, and be the center of attention Recalling the phrase some of my friends say ": If you don't show it, it isn’t worth it". He says this because he loves doing extreme activities and showing them to his friends by posting pictures on social media. For instance, the last thing he did was skydiving. Of course, it was very important for him to take pictures and record it. Once he had jumped, that very same day he posted the pictures of this activity on Instagram, and received many comments with praises for his courageousness and his astonishing pictures.
The third reason is that they are not afraid of being injured or dying. To be specific, some motorcycle drivers love to drive at very high speeds. I have known many cases in which they have been seriously injured in an accident, even so badly that they almost died, and despite that, they have continued doing these dangerous practices.
In summary, from my perspective, some people love risky activities because of the unique feeling they get, because they want to impress their friends, and because they are not afraid about the possible negative consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, while, even so, for example, for instance, in summary, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76955573287 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8214648665 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1176470588 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159843676152 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469086299414 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461342615712 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879263537218 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287219285041 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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