Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or activities?

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...comprise a very vital part of our lives.Most people love sports and are crazy about ...
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...le love sports and are crazy about them.Some of them involve very high risks that fe...
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...sks that few people are willing to take.I think those people like difficult sport...
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...ey do it for a living. First of all ,there are some fellows that love to take...
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...are some fellows that love to take risks .They want to overcome challenges that c...
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...e some fellows that love to take risks .They want to overcome challenges that come ...
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...me fellows that love to take risks .They want to overcome challenges that come in...
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...rcome challenges that come in their way.For instance,mountain climbers and hikers d...
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...nges that come in their way.For instance,mountain climbers and hikers do these activities...
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... to make them feel more lively and as if,they want to embrace life by taking risks.It...
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...ey want to embrace life by taking risks.It is totally one of the means of living a...
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...ns of living and enjoying life for them.This makes them feel satisfied and happy. ...
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...on from others can be a deciding factor.Although dangerous sports and activities involve...
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...sports and activities involve high risks,but the pride and admiration they provide a...
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...iration they provide are very valueable.This drives people to take part in these spo...
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...part in these sports and be a superstar.Success and fame move in parallel to each other...
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...and fame move in parallel to each other.Therefore,people try to succeed in this field to ...
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...ve fame and be a daredevil. Finally,everyone requires money to fulfill his/her famil...
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... to fulfill his/her family's needs.Moreover,if it can be achieved along with fame,...
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...ill his/her family's needs.Moreover,if it can be achieved along with fame,why...
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...r,if it can be achieved along with fame,why people would not make dangerous sports ...
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...t make dangerous sports as their living?There is a lot of money in this field that a...
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...people to pursue sports as their career.For example,acrobats and gymnasts earn a lo...
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...y huge amounts for their daring attitude . In conclusion,life without risks c...
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...eir daring attitude . In conclusion,life without risks can never be satisfying.D...
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...conclusion,life without risks can never be satisfying.Dangerous sports and activities helps p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42123287671 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64777607753 2.67179642975 137% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7914522108 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 316.6 100.406767564 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.6045352989 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.2 5.45110844103 481% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25665980049 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135214167519 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299889572326 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135214167519 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299889572326 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.3 11.7677419355 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 58.1214874552 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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