Why go to university?
Nowadays, in the industrialized world, almost every one especially youth attend to university. I strongly believe that new generation should go to university because of powering knowledge and their future work. These reasons are discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, knowledge is power. In fact, people especially who attend to university can solve their problems like social problems and life problems more than other people. These people usually experience problems which may be more harder than these problems. So they can solve these problem with more ease. Also, after they have accomplished their four-year education, they have a broaden horizons that certainly it helps them in the future life.
Second, people who go to university, are more capable of having a high-powered job than other people. it is certainly possible because of their experiences and education that they have learned during their education. In additional, because of these experiences they can work more efficient than other.
To sum up, I believe that entering to university will be very useful in the future life of every one. Certainly, it will be very useful for solving thier problems and finding a good job with more ease than other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g knowledge and their future work. These reasons are discussed in the following p...
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Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
...sually experience problems which may be more harder than these problems. So they can solve ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
... than these problems. So they can solve these problem with more ease. Also, after they have a...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed their four-year education, they have a broaden horizons that certainly it helps them i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore capable of having a high-powered job than other people. it is certainly possi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... a high-powered job than other people. it is certainly possible because of their ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194570135747 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.135746606335 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122171945701 0.0866891130778 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0678733031674 0.046263068375 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0723981900452 0.0685040099705 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135746606335 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0361990950226 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71700240885 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027149321267 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00452488687783 0.00188951952338 239% => OK
Determiners: 0.0633484162896 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0316742081448 0.0209618222197 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135746606335 0.0139019557991 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1240.0 2387.08602151 52% => OK
No of words: 197.0 408.028673835 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29441624365 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.48200974243 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390862944162 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294416243655 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208121827411 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152284263959 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71700240885 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548223350254 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 49.0315675673 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1538461538 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4941505888 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 44.5954705193 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.32786885246 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17340035047 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101853329211 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111561371674 0.0752933317313 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510339543249 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142306982236 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731869941212 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097280492434 0.0781384742642 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241103061482 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723788541124 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135555602198 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707430292752 0.0618886996521 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.