Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
By developing cities and extending population, authorizes have special concertation for regulation which has control the violence and criminal in the city. The result of this decision leads to have decreasing violence, organize the society and variety of regulation. In this essay discuss to disagree and agree about this controversial issue.
From 2000 years ago, international societies under variety of government have been facing many rules which have approved by authorizes, which help to sustain the security in the cities. Moreover observing the law on of crucial duty which people have to act within avoiding the law. For instance, in the third world countries, the crime rate has been decreased by police, which enforces the law in society. In general, it needs to observe that law comes to pretend us of nasty activities.
Some many people from developed country strongly believe that have organized condition for society is a vital factor. It helps to improve the community .however, lack of rules should be done by participating people and governments. To make complete this point, approximately half of 50% of people in China tend to maintain the busy street in rush hour in the capital city.it is essential to say that, if all aspect of law had approved in every country we definitely would have made progress to increase the offensive behaviour of people. And being organized have been being famous these days.
Some critics have a focus on the subject that, regulation has been complicated nova days. In the developing country, lack of knowledge about international management of the UN and another country leads to every organization have own rules for themselves. And, following the rules insist other organizations obey general the same structure. Although the regulation requires to reshape gain to enhance time and facilities. To sum up, power is not having the diversity of rules in the world.
In conclusion, individuals and organization under government look should have obeyed the rules for keeping modern society from disorders behaviour, however, sometime in need to decrease object for avoiding complicated law for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32544378698 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78967570446 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.446613596 48.9658058833 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.461538462 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0431016820765 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0178259300677 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290366421884 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0274789052281 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327763618479 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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