At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity. For example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to work alone or with others?
With the rapid development of society, to perform better in our workplace or school, creative mind are more required from time to time. Thus, a heated debate arises: whether people should work alone or with others when it comes to some special tasks. While a large group of people contend that working alone is the answer, I hold the opposite view for the following reasons.
First and foremost, working with others enables individual to get advice from another perspective, which can finally make the task more feasible. Teamwork is by no means a definitely mess aggregation, but many people’s endeavor towards a goal. To avoid causing trouble because of one’s incomplete consideration, one will be better advised to work with other. My brother Jackson is a good case in point. He was required to make a unique PPT to demonstrate his task by his professor, and he already had an ideal way to work on it. Nevertheless, when his deskmate found an added picture inappropriate occasionally and told him, Jackson realized this obvious mistake, which helped him from losing his face in class.
Another point worth mentioning is that working with others can undoubtedly enhance one’s working efficiency. As is known to all, several people working on the same task together increase the possibility of someone finding unique thoughts about the tasks as well as coming up with more ideas to choose, which can widen the range we consider. This will eventually boost the efficiency of work with no doubt. For instance, when Jack Ma first thought about starting an internet-based company, he had ten or so people came to help. Ma’s creative brain plus his friend’s new insight enables them to make the final decision at once. Thanks to their cooperation, Alibaba has already became tone of the most successful business worldwide.
Admittedly, merits of working alone cannot be ignored, for it creates an atmosphere which enables us to concentrate on our own task without being disturbed by other voice and mind. However, only after taking someone else’s opinion into consideration can we seize the core efficiently as well as correctly.
To put it into a nutshell, teamwork not only boosts one’s efficiency in work, but also provides a valuable chance to think the task critically. Therefore, I cannot put more emphasis on the importance of working with others as to deal with a new and different task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('definitely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('mess') instead of another adjective.
... more feasible. Teamwork is by no means a definitely mess aggregation, but many people's end...
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Suggestion:
...lped him from losing his face in class. Another point worth mentioning is that w...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... their cooperation, Alibaba has already became tone of the most successful business wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1328320802 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81817064617 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604010025063 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1397144472 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.789473684 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157802799329 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505902322768 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378825587417 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982488340515 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214854044586 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.