Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the modern world, different types of jobs might require the workers to do various tasks. Although some might consider a static job description satisfying, I personaly believe that challenging activities during a work day are better. The following paragraphs are written to elaborate my vantage point.
First, different tasks during the day will make the mind more dynamic when facing tough situations. If an employee gets used to a certain type of activity, the productivity level which is a crucial factor in job efficiency will be lost. Companies that have a long-term plan for prosperity in market, require the workers to be more creative and innovtive. Hence, the people who are in that company will face different tasks each working day. For instance, famous car manufacturers design a new product every year. The new product line will force the engineers and workers to solve unexpected problems to meet the standard protocol and demanding quality of the final product.
Second, dealing with different probelms at work will engage workers more with the job. This means that they always have something to do rather than just being present at the workplace and waiting for the day to finish. By numerous tasks, workers will paricipate more and gather together for meetings which results in brainstorming and solving the job puzzles easier. Hence, more cooperation will occor between coworkers which will keep them always up to date by sharing ideas and keeping them in the same level of information. This will make the worktime more pleasant for them and also keeps them satisfied with the job they are doing.
To conclude, it can be said that if workers find their job challenging and dynamic, they will be happier and more energetic. If employers do not want to lose the competition and market to their opponents, they have to provide a place where employees can do their best in it. This will result both in high level of job satisfaction among the workers and a successful future for the company.
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- Do you agreeor disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements makes products seem much better that they really are 80
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00297619048 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60873069445 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1980470504 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8823529412 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230187144097 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765084065159 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607481024569 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134886713507 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226618591799 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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