The workers are the main functional and structural unit of any organization and it is necessary for any organization to take care of their workers need such as economical as well as mental status. Yes, I agree with the statement that workers are more satisfied when they are doing different types of task at work place. There are a few reasons, which I shall explain in the following essay.
First of all, workers satisfaction matter for the growth of the company. In a company, there are several departments and in each department, there are several employees, who are designated to perform a specific duty. In the company, multi tasking persons are more satisfied, these employees perform several functions in comparison to other employees. And also motivates to other employees. For example, I am working in a research lab, and doing lots of different work at the same time. My different task always motivates me to learn something new related to the work. It affects my learning as well as mental status and I am more satisfied than other employees, who are doing a routine work.
Secondly, satisfaction with their own work is a key to success. The satisfaction leads happiness which helps to the worker in a positive way. For any employees, it is monotonous to perform the same activity every day. It increases the stress level and mental trauma to the workers, and affects their productivity regarding to their work. For example, my friend is working in a call center and his routine job is to reply to the customers. According to him, he is not satisfied with the job. There is nothing to learn for the future and it also causes stress to my friend. Now days he is in depression because of his job and planning to quit the job.
Finally, doing a different task at workplaces boost the confidence of the employees and it always motivates them to learn new thing in life. In stressful life it is necessary to be satisfied with the work, and being a multi-task oriented is more satisfactory than any this else.
In conclusion, multi-task oriented workers are more happy and satisfied with their job and they are more successful in life in comparison to other employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ads happiness which helps to the worker in a positive way. For any employees, it is monotonous t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79787234043 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77542875125 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441489361702 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.667487676 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9047619048 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216670374461 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645814196113 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844682124379 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144319839471 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625693834217 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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