Nowadays, it commonly accepted that enjoy variety is the natural part of the human mind. All of the people hate of repeating the same activities everyday and routine life. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that repeat some special works is not always sad and it can provide regularity and accuracy in life. However, I to a great extent, agree with this idea that workers would be more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than do similar tasks all day long.
First and foremost, a routine task in the workplace is really boring and it leads to employees lost their motivation and willing to job. This lack of happiness and reluctance to task could over time decrease worker efficiency and it makes client angry and unsatisfied from services. This happens can lead to reinforcing more pressure through supervisors that create a stronger time for the employees. Obviously, working in this situation is very far from a standard lifestyle. These people are under more risk of blood pressure and heart illness. In addition, longevity is lower in this people and census of suicide and mental sicks is remarkably higher than people who are satisfied with work condition.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that enforcing similar tasks and lack of variety caused a feeling like useless and depression in employees. When people do not experience challenges to do new things during their work, over time they lose their skills and knowledge that learned at university and it damage to their personality. Impact of happiness for people life is not hidden to anyone and it clear that company managers and sociologist should consider the importance of variety and motivation aspects of tasks in organizing the program.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I convinced that workers are more satisfied when they have a variety of tasks during the workday. Because variety has a direct association with a psyche healthy, happy life, the efficiency of works and the progress of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... is the natural part of the human mind. All of the people hate of repeating the same activ...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e hate of repeating the same activities everyday and routine life. Contrary to this popu...
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Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... would be more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ess. In addition, longevity is lower in this people and census of suicide and mental...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...hen people do not experience challenges to do new things during their work, over time...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'damages'?
Suggestion: damages
...ledge that learned at university and it damage to their personality. Impact of happine...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...ple life is not hidden to anyone and it clear that company managers and sociologist s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, still, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04034582133 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60236451594 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553314121037 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2426743957 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326092451894 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990880587308 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166685603435 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210944267565 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106165504144 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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