World today faces a lot of changes in all parts of life. The question is, whether this guick change make people less or more happy. This will be weighed in many different aspects. Admittedly, some believe, development which happened in our society make them less happy. In my perspective, I do not concur with this statement. I think, rapid changing in in the world make our life more enjoyable. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, With the rapid advancement in technology our life become easier. there is impovement in all achievement in our job. for instance, presence of internet offers a huge facilities that help people to do there work in short time and with perfect result. can just put a key word in Google or you tube to obtain a tremendous information. My daughter use her computer to do her school works and any project she has, but, when I was in school, I had to go to library to do my assignment and I could barely borrow two books not more. As we can see the importance of advance in technology now a days.
In addition, we can not deny the advancemet in medicine field. More, there are many new equipment that help to make a good diagnosis. Due to this fast improvement in this field, people can save their life and life happy with their families. This is example from my real live, When I was ten years old, my grand mom dead because she had a breast cancer. as we all know, in that time there is no a good devises do discover this tumer like mamogram which we have today. Furthermore, with the improvement of researching experiments, experts physions chemists can discover new medications that help in cure this desease. If my grandmom live these days, might be recover from this illness.
To wrap up, I believe people will be happy with fast changing in world. This is based on expositions which are mentions above. quich change mean development in technology and medicine field which are a paramount things in this life.
Wold today susptible to alot of changes in all parts of life. The question is, whether this guick change make people less or more happy. This will be wieghed in many different aspects. Admittedly, some believe, the motification which happened in our society makethem less happy. In my perspective, I do not concur with this statement. I think, rapid changing in in the world make our life more enjoyable. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, With the rapid advancement in technology our life become easier. there is im povement in all achievment in our job. for instance, presence of internet offers a huge facilities that help people to do there work in short time and with perfect result. Indifidules can just put a key word in Google or you tube to obtain a tremendous information. My daughter use her computer to do her school works and any project she has, but, when I was in school, I had to go to library to do mmy assignment and I could barely borrow two books not more. As we can see the importance of advance in technology now a days.
In addition, we can not deny the advancemet in medicine field. More, there are many new equipment that help to make a good digniosis. Due to this fast improvement in this field, people can save their life and life happy with their families. This is example from my real live, When I was ten years old, my grand mom dead because she had a breast cancer. as we all know, in that time there is no a good devises do discover this tumer like mamogram which we have today. Furthermore, with the improvment of reseaching experments, experts physions chemists can discover new medications that help in cure this desease. If my grandmom live these days, might be recover from this illness.
To wrap up, I believe people will be happy with fast changing in world. This is based on expositions which are mentions above. quich change mean development in technology and medicine field which are a paramount things in this life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... or more happy. This will be wieghed in many different aspects. Admittedly, some believe, the ...
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Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...this statement. I think, rapid changing in in the world make our life more enjoyable....
^^^^^
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...t in technology our life become easier. there is im povement in all achievment in our...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... povement in all achievment in our job. for instance, presence of internet offers a...
^^^
Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...nce, presence of internet offers a huge facilities that help people to do there work in sh...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...the importance of advance in technology now a days. In addition, we can not deny the ad...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 612, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...importance of advance in technology now a days. In addition, we can not deny the ad...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of advance in technology now a days. In addition, we can not deny the advance...
^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much new equipment', 'a good deal of new equipment'.
Suggestion: much new equipment; a good deal of new equipment
...emet in medicine field. More, there are many new equipment that help to make a good digniosis. Due...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...m dead because she had a breast cancer. as we all know, in that time there is no a...
^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
.... as we all know, in that time there is no a good devises do discover this tumer l...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Quich
...n expositions which are mentions above. quich change mean development in technology a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60055096419 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5948600008 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2666073324 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6086956522 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7826086957 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389998067672 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113643824965 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104934525872 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26232071242 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171870918854 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... or more happy. This will be wieghed in many different aspects. Admittedly, some believe, the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...this statement. I think, rapid changing in in the world make our life more enjoyable....
^^^^^
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...t in technology our life become easier. there is im povement in all achievment in our...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... povement in all achievment in our job. for instance, presence of internet offers a...
^^^
Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...nce, presence of internet offers a huge facilities that help people to do there work in sh...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...the importance of advance in technology now a days. In addition, we can not deny the ad...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 612, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...importance of advance in technology now a days. In addition, we can not deny the ad...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of advance in technology now a days. In addition, we can not deny the advance...
^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much new equipment', 'a good deal of new equipment'.
Suggestion: much new equipment; a good deal of new equipment
...emet in medicine field. More, there are many new equipment that help to make a good digniosis. Due...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...m dead because she had a breast cancer. as we all know, in that time there is no a...
^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
.... as we all know, in that time there is no a good devises do discover this tumer l...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Quich
...n expositions which are mentions above. quich change mean development in technology a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60055096419 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5948600008 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2666073324 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6086956522 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7826086957 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389998067672 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113643824965 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104934525872 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26232071242 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171870918854 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.