You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about the experience? Why?
If I’m planning to work or study in abroad I would expect to have all the essentials things a person should have like transportation, education, and economic qualities. International studies are becoming a way to expand the education beyond our traditional education style. In my opinion studying abroad would be the best experience for us and to have a better career opportunities.
Studying abroad and international education is now becoming a trend for young people nowadays. It will give the students the new experience to work or study. Even the universities and schools in abroad are best compared to local countries that’s the reason I prefer studying abroad. The universities have best communication skills, education quality and they expect students like us to have better qualification in education
Studying abroad help us to increase the knowledge of different cultures and lifestyle of the country. Basically it is better for a student to learn extra language so that it expertises the communication ability. For example, I had an interview in my college the first question they asked me was, do I know any extra languages and if I planning to study abroad you will expect comfort zone or you will adjust with the surrounding? No, we can’t expect comfort zone always .
In my opinion, if I want to study abroad I have to get used to the atmosphere around me. And it’s even difficult for us to communicate with our parents. Only through phones and face timing helps us. And we even find difficulties in change of timing, food cycle, lifestyle compared to our country. Moreover, having international qualifications or degree help to open the door for job. And even employees prefer to graduate with higher qualification.
On a nutshell, I conclude that studying in abroad helps us to get new experience and good education qualities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12459016393 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0908209254 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514754098361 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2067042164 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208043716134 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608737357714 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735365907928 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120934072047 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629272713844 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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