about wave energy machine

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about wave energy machine

The wave-energy machine is a brake-through inventsion, it converts wave-energy into electrical
energy. This wave-energy machine has two chambers stacked on one another, there is a one-way
channel as well as an two-way channel to maintain the air flow and the pressure in the two
chambers. The bottom chamber has a big opening in the bottom right-wall of the chamber and
the top chamber has two turbines connected to an axial which is also connected to a electricity
generator, the top chamber also has a big opening in the roof top-right as well as an mesh
opening. This machine simply works by waves going into the bottom chamber and forming
pressure which pushes up the air and rotates the turbines and this rotates the axial which is
connected to the electricity generator.
This wave-energy machine can be placed either at near the beach which is cost effeciant but the
output is low due to small waves or can be placed a bit far into the ocean which isn’t cost
effeciant but the output is high.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... there is a one-way channel as well as an two-way channel to maintain the air flo...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to an axial which is also connected to a electricity generator, the top chamber...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...pening in the roof top-right as well as an mesh opening. This machine simply work...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86285714286 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71283570292 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474285714286 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8460024548 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.2 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260261475364 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186162544875 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155725411234 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107069367087 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155029717549 0.0819641961636 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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