Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities
Young people are considered to be the building block of any community, and the country as a whole. In the past, the time of our father, they were often busy with their societal or community work. However, the scenario is exactly the opposite nowadays. Personally I believe that these young generations were less enrolled in activities of communities. I feel this way for several reasons, which I would explore in the following essays.
To begin with, in this period, people are always focused on the path of development. For this, education is one of the essential needs. Many of them give the majority of the time towards learning. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. In the time of my parents, when they were young, they did not feel education as paramount. They give their scarce time to the study and passed the majority of time in social activities and community development. Moreover, they have a feeling of unity. In contrast, today's' people have invested their majority of time in the process of learning. The competition has grown worldwide. They were more focused on their own activities rather than the societies. Thus, although you people seek to give time to their community, they were unable to give it in certain circumstances. Everyone in this generation was found to be busy in their respective work. As a result, young people are no able to give their time to society.
Regarding this, the society of today has drastically changed, and it is the impact of the attitudes of the person of this era. People mainly believe in ostentatious rather than on reality. These young generations are modern, well-fashioned. For example, many young people felt that when they have done the works of society like sanitation, they were humiliated or prestige has abated. The insular concept of them deviates from the community development work. Additionally, they prefer to enjoy and celebrate in life without any endeavor. Consequently, they damn care about others. However, in the period of our parents and grandparents, they have the feeling of cooperation, unity and shows humility upon one another. As a result, it always provides their time for the sake of society.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people of the young era faced limited with the communities. This is because the community is progressing day by day with a nature of competition, and because the state of thinking and behavior of the person changes significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98786407767 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84839688803 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4055382005 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8620689655 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2068965517 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79310344828 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284679794611 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794577518246 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892618640919 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172111448349 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867613296704 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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