younger people unlike elders, they enjoy life more
agree or disagree
It is quite a common notion that a younger generation always enjoys more and in a better way than its elder generation. however what qualifies as enjoyable is moot. various people have various ways in which they can agree that they are having fun. For some people, able to spend their quality time is fun and for some able to go to night-outs is fun. In my opinion, younng people do enjoy their lives than the elderly for three main reasons.
Firstly, young people especially the crowd entering their worklife have an optimistic and positive attitude towards their new jobs or businesses which wears out with time for a person. due to this, they carry out their works with much more vigor than elder people.
Secondly, being able to have a lifestyle of their own makes it an individual appreciate their life more. young adults do possess a new responsible attitude which also contains a tinge of recklessness and immaturity carried forward from their teenage. For example, a young adult can go out with their friends any time they want, eat whatever they like without caring about their diests, stay up late as long as they want, etc. however, these actions may not be regarded as beneficial to some but others do enjoy it and surely would be able to do it when are of early age. On the other hand, even if an elder person would enjoy such doing such actions they would have to probably think about their jobs, spending time with their family, their health, etc.
Last but not the least, I think that the best type of enjoyment is being independent. young crowd is far more self-dependent than the older crowd is. For example, my grandmother, when she was 90 years old became way too weak due to sickness to even eat by herself. she needed help with any daily activity which is necessary for a person such as walking, eating, bathing and many more. The advantage of not being dependent on someone for even such quotidian tasks is much more better than always getting help for them.
In conclusion, I believe that younger generation has advantage over the the elder mass on the given three situations and due to this they can enjoy their life in a better and desirable way in which they like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67179487179 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32641408575 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9901784774 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146255146298 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549141115072 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541642236374 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103605659199 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682434635335 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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