Your friend is going to reduce the living expenses. Which of the following way would
you recommend to your friend and why?
1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.
2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.
3. Shop for less expensive food to cook at home.
reducing living expenses, one of the most common goals of each family, is always being valued and triggered heated discussion on which is the effective way to save money. Finding a roommate to share house rent and living expenses, or buying new technology produces less frequently, in some people's view, are much better ways. Contrary to these opinions is my perspective that the best solution is shopping for less expensive food and cooking at home.
To begin with, shopping for less expensive food will considerably decrease the daily cost by purchasing discounted foods and fostering the habit of thrift. Obviously, more money could be saved, with cheaper food bought, compared with other approaches. To be more specific, the cheap food, almost expired and less delicious, is preferred by fewer people, resulting in lower prices. if we buy this kind of food frequently, we can keep our budget tight.
what should be emphasized is that never should we ignore the positive effect of consuming cheap food. purchasing less expensive food regularly could increase the awareness of saving money on other consumption. this influence is neglected by most people. For instance, once we adapt to this kind of life, we will gradually incline to reduce expenses in other aspects of life, such as clothing or entertainment. However, this kind of habit won't be fostered when people only decrease the frequency of buying technology devices.
Besides, what is equally significant is that cooking at home, healthy and meaningful activity in daily life, will also help decline the living costs. going to the restaurants with friends will cost a great amount of money because we have to pay for the service in the way of tips to the waiters. this partition of life expensive can be saved if we cook at home. At the same time, we also save the cost of transportation to the restaurant. what's more, by cooking at home, people will become more healthy since they can control the ingredient in the food. we can prepare more healthy food for ourselves according to our own condition and keep a balanced diet, reducing the possibility of obesity and heart disease. foods in restaurants, on the other hand, will not guarantee health and cleanliness. As a result, the less frequently we visit restaurants, the less likely to get sick. Therefore, cooking at home could lower the frequency of going to the hospital, reducing life expenses potentially. this can not be achieved by just sharing expenses with roommates.
In conclusion, living expenses, a significant element in people's life, can be effectively cut down if we shop for less expensive food and cook at home, due to the positive impact on thrift and healthy habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09111111111 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71578922435 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502222222222 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0328315167 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6086956522 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86956521739 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289753225045 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893859209377 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630004842884 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190723725569 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569167782391 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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