the article states that The origin and authenticity of the European silver coin and provides the reasons to support .
however , the lecture explain that the coin is not fake and refuse to each of the author's reason.
first , the reading claims that there are great distance between the Maine site and the Norse settlement in the Canada is more than a thousand of kilometer.
The lecture refutes this point by saying that there are many object in Maine site which came from far away from north America and also said that native people are
interested in traveling to long distances.
Second , the article posits that Norse did not bring any silver coin with him to the North America settlement.
however the professor says that Norse never create any settlement . According to the professor, when they went back to the Europe at that time they could bring the coin with them .
Third, The reading says that The native American did not recognize the silver coin as money.
the lecture opposes this by explaining that Norse knew that Native people understand the value of special objects and they also admire there beauty .
it states that people can use these objects as jewelry or as neckless and they can also utilize silver coin in trading.
we also learn that these coins are not fake and North American admire the beauty of these coins.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87826086957 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17587372405 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0587216212 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.09492273731 269% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262610652325 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100897231953 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063647239152 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100745793355 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065167268344 0.0443174109184 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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