Animal fossils
The reading and lecture are both about Tyrannosaurus rex which existed 70 million years ago. The author of the reading feels that the tissue of the Tyrannosaurus rex is the actual tissue and represents some seasons for holding the aspect. The lecturer challenged the claim made by the author. He is on the opinion that the reasons are sceptical.
To begin with, the author argues that the bones contained a hollow space where the organic blood cells may be located. He also claims that the soft substance contained in the channels may be the actual blood vessels of the Tyrannosaurus rex. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He mentions that soft substance remained in the hollow space may be other substance. Bacteria may live that place and this bacteria was the soft substances.
Second, the writer suggests that the inner bone contained spheres where red blood cells observed. He also states that the sphere contains iron which is the main substance of red blood cells. The lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that reddish spheres found any blood cell of ancient animals. The spheres had probably used for a different feature like mineral.
Third, the author posits that evidence proved that dinosaur leg bones contained collagen. He also additionally says, collagen the main substance of the fibre and it found only living bone tissue. In contrast, the lecturer position is that collagen found the only animal lived 1000 years ago and this Tyrannosaurus rex was from 70-million years ago, thus it was not convincing. He also notes that it did not come from the T-rex, may be from other sources like a human. Only human contains collagen and may be when human handling the T-rex collagen comes from that source.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ts some seasons for holding the aspect. The lecturer challenged the claim made by t...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tance. Bacteria may live that place and this bacteria was the soft substances. Sec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, third, thus, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 291.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98281786942 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46766502935 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7830706548 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802215908693 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280933872921 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028882701776 0.0662205650399 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496630794332 0.162205337803 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115707112789 0.0443174109184 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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