Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice
The articles states that the sending people to an asteroid is best choice among the ideas living in other planet, and provide three reason for supports. However, the professor explains that this the idea in which sending people to asteroids not only is it impractical, but also has a serious downside. the professor refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that the asteroids have lower gravity, thereby landing and taking off the spacecraft is easier than other planet. the professor refutes this point by stating that the low gravity has a certain risk in both mussels and bones mass, it makes loosen the mussels and bones' tissue structures. Despite the fact that the low gravity is suitable in short term, it is a dangerous and leads to the health problem in the long term.
Second, the article claims that the mining in the asteroids would be extremely profitable and a perfect source of these raw materials. However, the professor contends that the availability of mineral in the asteroids is not only factor in assessment of elements and precious metals profitability. also, additional factor specially the cost of conveying such material is important, therefor, if the quantity of mining yields is not big enough, mining would be unprofitable.
Third, the reading avers that the colonization of asteroids is a good option, inasmuch as it would be very easy to reach. the lecturer opposes this point by saying that the asteroids comes close to earth's orbit, although it is easy to reach in coming, the asteroids stay not close to earth's orbit and go far away close to planet such as Mars. by doing so, reaching to the asteroids would be challenging.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'state'.
Suggestion: state
The articles states that the sending people to an asteroid ...
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Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... that the sending people to an asteroid is best choice among the ideas living in other ...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...tical, but also has a serious downside. the professor refutes each of the authors r...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...spacecraft is easier than other planet. the professor refutes this point by stating...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sels and bones mass, it makes loosen the mussels and bones tissue structures. Des...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tissue structures. Despite the fact that the low gravity is suitable in short ter...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... claims that the mining in the asteroids would be extremely profitable and a perf...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'metals'' or 'metal's'?
Suggestion: metals'; metal's
... in assessment of elements and precious metals profitability. also, additional factor ...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ents and precious metals profitability. also, additional factor specially the cost o...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...much as it would be very easy to reach. the lecturer opposes this point by saying t...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'asteroids'' or 'asteroid's'?
Suggestion: asteroids'; asteroid's
...r opposes this point by saying that the asteroids comes close to earths orbit, although i...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'earth'.
Suggestion: earth
...aying that the asteroids comes close to earths orbit, although it is easy to reach in ...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'earth'.
Suggestion: earth
...coming, the asteroids stay not close to earths orbit and go far away close to planet s...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
... far away close to planet such as Mars. by doing so, reaching to the asteroids wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 283.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96466431095 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60760626502 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9860317827 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993875685583 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385025585959 0.0996497079465 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282269067002 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576221579431 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241702055115 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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