Both the reading and lecture are about chaco canyon which are called great houses. according to the reading these house were used according to the three competing theories. But the lecture opposing with the theories in the reading section.
To begin with, the reading section says that these houses were used for purely residential building. The structure of houses are the evidence for earlier version of architecture; however, The lecture contradicts with the reading and says that, great houses were not used as residential buildings because if they were residential there must be more fireplaces for cocking. as there are very low amount of fire places for example, there must were 100 fireplces for 100 families instead of 10 fireplces for 100 families.
Furthermore, The reading states other theory that they were used to store food supply and the frain maize is the prove for this statement; on the other hand, the lecture says that if they were used to store grain maize so, why there is spoilled maize and why there is remaining of the maize.
Finally, the last theory of reading section suggests that great houses were used for ceremonial centers and the enormopus mound form by pile of the old material is the evidence of the suggestion;however, the lecture says that mound of the pile for old material are the building material which where used by workers and they are the trashes which found after the work.
Both the reading and lecture are about CHACO canyon which are called great houses. according to the reading these house were used according to the three competing theories. But the lecture opposing with the theories in the reading section.
To begin with, the reading section says that these houses were used for purely residential building. The structure of houses are the evidence for earlier version of architecture; however, The lecture contradicts with the reading and says that, great houses were not used as residential buildings because if they were residential there must be more fireplaces for cocking. as there are very low amount of fire places for example, there must were 100 fireplaces for 100 families instead of 10 fireplaces for 100 families.
Furthermore, The reading states other theory that they were used to store food supply and the drain maize is the prove for this statement; on the other hand, the lecture says that if they were used to store grain maize so, why there is spoiled maize and why there is remaining of the maize.
Finally, the last theory of reading section suggests that great houses were used for ceremonial centers and the enormous mound form by pile of the old material is the evidence of the suggestion;however, the lecture says that mound of the pile for old material are the building material which where used by workers and they are the trashes which found after the work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...O canyon which are called great houses. according to the reading these house were used ac...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...re must be more fireplaces for cocking. as there are very low amount of fire place...
^^
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...aces for cocking. as there are very low amount of fire places for example, there must ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to storing'.
Suggestion: used to storing
...ding states other theory that they were used to store food supply and the drain maize is the ...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tore food supply and the drain maize is the prove for this statement; on the other hand, ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to storing'.
Suggestion: used to storing
...and, the lecture says that if they were used to store grain maize so, why there is spoiled ma...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ain maize so, why there is spoiled maize and why there is remaining of the maize....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94166666667 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49998611107 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.982565144 49.2860985944 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.25 110.228320801 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 21.698381199 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479645464168 0.272083759551 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.303114566817 0.0996497079465 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187837531983 0.0662205650399 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365577281056 0.162205337803 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.333604042224 0.0443174109184 753% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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