Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is life easier than 60 years age? Some people believes that, contemporary life is much easier than half a century before. Some others contradicts and mentions that, old lives were very comfortable and everyone could handle it. In my opinion, life today is easier than it was when my grandparents were children. I feel this way for three reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, technology has made this life not difficult than it was. Consider the envelope letter that sent to other countries, and took a lot of time receive the answer. As my grandmother says, in their time if people wanted to send a letter to another city they would be waited more than a month to receive the response. In addition, sometimes the letters lost for no reasons, and people could not take their letters, but nowadays people can send a letter very quickly and receive the response via a minute or less.
Furthermore, by improving mechanical machines works are easier than before. In the past if people wanted to transfer loads from a place to another place it was too hard especially with that traditional carriers like: donkeys, horses or cows. On the contrary, now people can transfer tons of goods via mechanical machines to far distances, and has no human involvement.
Finally, nowadays people can travel around the world within hours, which was impossible in the past. By the improvement of flying machines like: helicopter, jets and big airplanes people can travel easier to another countries. In the past people were used to go to other countries on leg which took a lot of time and tiresome. For example, when people wanted to travel from Afghanistan to Iran it took approximately one month, but now people can go in three hours by a flight or one day by a car.
In conclusion, life is easier than it was before. This is because of improvement in technology and mechanical machines and also, people can travel to other countries at very short time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'contradict'.
Suggestion: contradict
...than half a century before. Some others contradicts and mentions that, old lives were very ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78592375367 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61441843169 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510263929619 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6979512183 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184215809448 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775147850239 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912861483384 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112732312395 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924242953706 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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