Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Why people like to do enjoyment things than their responsibilities. some people believes enjoying things takes less energy and can be both easy and spiritual practices while, others believe that, although it is good but we should not forget our responsibilities against out families. I personally agree with the idea of the people are not doing what they should.
first of all, Most of people do not check their health with a Doctor, which is very important. As technology advances some people become lazier. for example, my uncle suffers from diabetes type A which is very dangerous and I see him every week and ask him that if he check his diabetes, but he laughs and say no. When I see such kind of careness; I doubt about the responsibilities that should done by people.
moreover, Most of people are not sporting, which has a negative effect on them. With increasing rate of cars amount in the city areas people forget about the benefits of the jugging and walking. All king of sports playing a crucial role in being healthy. By having regular times for sport we remain healthy and energetic.
Finally, most of young people playing video games and travel in social media, which is not necessary.
playing games is one of the most distracting things that student should be away from it, but instead they are always playing with their mobiles and this can be very bad for them. for example, my cousin Amir that has become first grade last year was a great student. When his father purchased him a mobile the grades are now decreased and this is why I recommend people to avoid their children from playing games a lot.
as a conclusion, people forget their main responsibilities which are crucial. people are not sporting and they don't check their health and also they forget to avoid their children from playing video games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...ent things than their responsibilities. some people believes enjoying things takes l...
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...lieves enjoying things takes less energy and can be both easy and spiritual pract...
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...people are not doing what they should. first of all, Most of people do not check the...
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... doing what they should. first of all, Most of people do not check their health with a Doctor...
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...with a Doctor, which is very important. As technology advances some people become ...
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...ogy advances some people become lazier. for example, my uncle suffers from diabetes...
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Message: Did you mean 'have done' or 'do'?
Suggestion: have done; do
... about the responsibilities that should done by people. moreover, Most of people ar...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...sibilities that should done by people. moreover, Most of people are not sporting, which...
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... that should done by people. moreover, Most of people are not sporting, which has a negative ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
...remain healthy and energetic. Finally, most of young people playing video games and travel i...
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... social media, which is not necessary. playing games is one of the most distracting th...
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...iles and this can be very bad for them. for example, my cousin Amir that has become...
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...eir children from playing games a lot. as a conclusion, people forget their main ...
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Suggestion: People
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Suggestion: don't
...ucial. people are not sporting and they dont check their health and also they forget...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77044025157 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5391772266 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6002640677 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196976757368 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779786166484 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11565679306 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101737704609 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107452425786 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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