Broccoli is a vegetable that is popular throughout the United States, but it can be grown only in temperate climates with mild summers. Because of this limitation, 90 percent of the broccoli consumed in the United States is grown in the cooler regions of California, on the West Coast. It must be shipped 4:000 kilometers across the entire country to reach the populous East Coast
This situation may soon change, however: scientists are attempting to create a new type of broccoli that can be grown on the East Coast despite the hotter summers there. This project has several potential benefits.
First, growing broccoli on the East Coast and distributing it to nearby grocery stores would lower broccoli costs for consumers Transporting the vegetable from California by truck takes several days, which makes transportation costs high. Growing broccoli locally would reduce transportation costs, so stores could sell broccoli for less money.
Second; the new type of broccoli will probably be much more desirable to consumers than some other new crops. The new broccoli is being created using traditional breeding techniques: researchers are crossbreeding broccoli with other similar plants that have desirable characteristics, such as resistance to hot summers Other new crops—varieties of squash or maize, for example—were created using genetic modification technology. Genetically modified crops are very controversial: many consumers believe they are unsafe and so reject them. However, the new broccoli will not be in that category.
Third, vegetables are healthiest to eat right after they are harvested because they retain most of their beneficial nutrients and vitamins. The Ion ger it takes for a vegetable like broccoli to reach consumers, the fewer nutrients and vitamins it contains. Broccoli that is grown locally can be eaten much sooner after it is cut, which will make this new broccoli healthier for East Coast residents than California broccoli.
Both the reading and lecture discuss whether broccoli is suitable for growing on the East Coast of United states.The former argues that growing the broccoli in East Coast rather than bringing from West Coast, and provides three benefits for doing so, but the latter challenges each of these points.
First of all the passage asserts that planting the broccoli in the East Coast reducing the cost of transportation, as a result the consumers can get it in reasonable prices. However, the professor counters that this will not work because the yield of broccoli would be low in East Coast as comparision to West. Due to low harvesting, the prices of broccoli will increases to consumers. Moreover, the cost of transportation and cost of broccoli grown in East Coast remains same.
Secondly, accoding to the text, the expert opined that novice cultivar of broccoli, which invented through traditional methods will mainly desirable to consumers than some other new genetically modified crops. In contrast, the proffesor rebuts this idea because even though the new varieties of broccoli created by orthodox breeding the consumers remains doubtful. she supports her argument by presenting the example of company who has created this new broccoli cultivars which has also invented the genetically modified news crops, which has bad reputation before.
Finally, the author claims that fesh broccoli produced in the East Coast contains various nutrients and vitamins. Nevertheless, the speaker is add with the passage that there are many others vegetables such as kale which contains same or even more nutrients and vitamins than broccoli.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'increase'.
Suggestion: increase
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Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...reeding the consumers remains doubtful. she supports her argument by presenting the...
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Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laims that fesh broccoli produced in the East Coast contains various nutrients an...
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Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'added'.
Suggestion: added
... vitamins. Nevertheless, the speaker is add with the passage that there are many ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33590733591 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6663076238 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7899668231 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.2 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06452816374 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192180026619 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081299628351 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245934062736 0.0662205650399 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108145244156 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324907401188 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.