Children should be required to help with household tasks. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
There are many views about whether children should be required to do housework. Some people may claim that parents should do all the work and let children play and enjoy their childhood. In my opinion, I strongly believe that children should help with household tasks because it is a good way to teach kids to be responsible, discipline and it creates a sense of unity in their home.
First of all, children need to be responsible in order to succeed in life. If a child learns how to be responsible since they are young, the school will definitely be easier to deal with. For example, teachers send homework every day to their students. If kids have had experience in their past about how to deal with work, it will allow them to understand that there are consequences if they do not their homework. Doing what is correct it is always rewarded and easy to deal with in the long term.
Secondly, if children have a small task every week, it will create discipline. Having a routine or working on a specific task regularly, creates progress. For instance, if an individual wakes up early every day to learn or work on something, in the long term can master the skill. Guitar players are a good example of that. They start playing every day something small and with discipline in a few weeks can play a full song.
Finally, if children help their parents in the house, they will be part of a team. A sense of unity can be created by working as a team player. For instance, the parents can do tasks related to the kitchen and the children can work in the garden. This way of dividing and organizing the task makes everyone involved in the cleaning of the house which makes nobody more important than others but also a sense of need from everyone. From my own experience, working as a team player creates opportunities to succeed in life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that children should help with the house. This is because it teaches the kids to be responsible, it creates the discipline to master skills in the long term and creates a sense of unity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58648648649 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52962144605 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2892975863 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.85 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199287082158 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703240693564 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674696542276 0.0662205650399 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126406740963 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668539474721 0.0443174109184 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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