Delta Dog Breeding Essay 2
Despite the fact dogs have intrinsic characteristics or skills for hunting, herding or guarding. Nowadays the dog’s desirable characteristics by the breeders difere. They are more focused on pure breeds and they registered them in canine associations like American Kennel Club.
First, the reading explains how the breeders main goal is standardize and maintain specific dogs’ points like the appearance. For instance, the dog breeders help to improve different dog breeds and participate in their welfare. On the other hand, the professor talks about the backyard breeders who are more worried about the profit than the dog’s welfare.
Second, the reading severed that social media, shows, and movies helped to have a better conception of different breeds and even though to have an easier experience being a dog owner. However the professor refutes the fact pointing that the canine associations take more care of dog’s puritty than their health. In addition, the professor also points out that after the puppies grow and become adults, the people don’t want them anymore and then are abandoned.
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- TPO 29 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement To improve the quality of education universities should spend more money on the salaries of university professors Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'standardized'.
Suggestion: standardized
... explains how the breeders main goal is standardize and maintain specific dogs’ points like...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...an easier experience being a dog owner. However the professor refutes the fact pointing...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 174.0 270.72406181 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37931034483 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65432638161 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 419.366225166 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8848918277 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217322986701 0.272083759551 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952955013936 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660636284201 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153222984888 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344063264107 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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