Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed in the reading passage.
The reading text and lecture are both about the how people are used the Chaco Canyon two to three stories building that found in the New Maxico. Lecturer is cast doubt on the author's view by placing his three arguments.
Firstly, The reading passage stats that, this buildings are used a residential purpose by people. Moreover he said that, this infrastructure are worked as a apartment for 100 peoples. However, the lecturer is argues that, If that building is able to accommodate hundreds of people, then there were be also a enough Fire placed for the cooking that 100 peoples. But evidence shows that, there only few fire places are present, which can support 10 families.
Secondly, The other theory of the author suggests that, buildings are used a storage for the food material and people of that era stored a maize grains over there. In other end, the lecturer is contradict that, there is a possibility of storage houses. But, Archeologist did not found various species of maize. not even the big container in which those people are stored this grain at time of excavation.
At the end, Writer of this passage argues that, this buildings are used as a ceremonial events. Additionally, He present the evidence of the archeological report, which showing that, excavators are found the pot and this pot are used in a events. In contrast, the lecturer stats that, excavators also found other material too like a building material material, construction tools, sand etc. So, this will indicate that this houses were places, in which peoples are used to through its used material and pot were the part of their used material.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...reading text and lecture are both about the how people are used the Chaco Canyon two to...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...irstly, The reading passage stats that, this buildings are used a residential purpos...
^^^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e used a residential purpose by people. Moreover he said that, this infrastructure are w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that, this infrastructure are worked as a apartment for 100 peoples. However, the...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ate hundreds of people, then there were be also a enough Fire placed for the cooki...
^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...reds of people, then there were be also a enough Fire placed for the cooking that...
^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
...er there. In other end, the lecturer is contradict that, there is a possibility of storage...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...did not found various species of maize. not even the big container in which those p...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd, Writer of this passage argues that, this buildings are used as a ceremonial even...
^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'event'?
Suggestion: event
...this buildings are used as a ceremonial events. Additionally, He present the evidence ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... found the pot and this pot are used in a events. In contrast, the lecturer stats...
^
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a event' or simply 'events'?
Suggestion: a event; events
... found the pot and this pot are used in a events. In contrast, the lecturer stats that, ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: material
...ound other material too like a building material material, construction tools, sand etc. So, this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 277.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92418772563 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54389452229 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4499237143 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0485266523276 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203543293078 0.0996497079465 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164874655763 0.0662205650399 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344327584882 0.162205337803 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168414175391 0.0443174109184 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.