Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do
In nowadays, peolpe tend to spend most of their time to finding new hobbies and their idea is we must live in the moment. We live once, So we should just thinking about how we can be happy in the moment and its our goal. In my point of view, Its not a good idea, so I'm disagree with spend to much time on just personal enjoyment we likes. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, we can not focus on our comfortablity and enjoyment, because if we just thinking about now and our pleasure in the moment we might loose some thing important in our future. We should care about things that are valuable and have important rules in our lives. For example if we use drugs more than several times just because it gives us passion and good feeling right now we will be sick in future and our health will be in serious danger and maybe we do not appourtunity to make it right again and loose our health or maybe parts of our body forever.
Secondly, we must built our life and we are responciple for it. builting our lives, needs a especefic plan and it's not easy way. In that prograss we have to be pacient and do some works every day probably we don't like at the time but we do it for the final resualt and happeines that gives us after long time. we will be forced to work hard for our future and maybe some times it will bottering us and it can be borring prograss. but we never gives up because we are fimiliar with this scentence "No pain, NO Gain". We realize that truly since we were kids.
in conclusion, I strongly belive that we shouldn't focus on just works we like and we enjoy them, we have to pick challenging ways sometimes and do hard works for ourselve and people who will related us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays, peolpe tend to spend most of their tim...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... hobbies and their idea is we must live in the moment. We live once, So we should just thinki...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...just thinking about how we can be happy in the moment and its our goal. In my point of view, ...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t how we can be happy in the moment and its our goal. In my point of view, Its not ...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... and its our goal. In my point of view, Its not a good idea, so Im disagree with sp...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... point of view, Its not a good idea, so Im disagree with spend to much time on jus...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... a good idea, so Im disagree with spend to much time on just personal enjoyment we...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'like'
Suggestion: like
...much time on just personal enjoyment we likes. I feel this way for two reasons, which...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will explore in the following essay. First of all, we can not focus on our co...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...ust thinking about now and our pleasure in the moment we might loose some thing important in ...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...and our pleasure in the moment we might loose some thing important in our future. We ...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...r pleasure in the moment we might loose some thing important in our future. We should care...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...example if we use drugs just because it give us passion and good feeling right now w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur health will be in serious danger. Secondly, we must built our life and we ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ciple for it. builting our lives, needs a especefic plan and its not easy way. In...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and do some works every day probably we dont like at the time but we do it for the f...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...appeines that gives us after long time. we will be forced to work hard for our fut...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...times it will bottering us and it can be borring prograss. but we never gives up ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ing us and it can be borring prograss. but we never gives up because we are fimili...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...alize that truly since we were kids. in conclusion, I strongly belive that we s...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...n conclusion, I strongly belive that we shouldnt focus on just works we like and we enjo...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urselve and people who will related us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 22.412803532 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28896103896 5.08290768461 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20604160924 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6517711893 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3571428571 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104107877263 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443800179033 0.0996497079465 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05629039173 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076345831484 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263963563645 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 12.2367328918 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.