Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
In my opinion, it's a big issue to find out how we should live for the rest of our life. we will be concern when we think about where we should live or is it a great choice for my family? I agree with living in one town because of two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I prefer living in one town for many years because of relationships. I spend time on finding people who are similar with me in many different things like our beliefs and our goals and ... . being in relationships have a great impact on people life. we are humans and we need to communicate with other humans and build strong relationships with them. we need to share our feeling with somebody who we trust and for collecting this person in our life we must try to be in different places and relationships and after that, we will find royal people but if we move town to town after a couple of years we can not build good relationships because we do not have enough time for finding right people.
Secondly, It is a better choice for me to live in one town because of my children. with migration to a new place, I separate my children from their school and friends. they will hurt because of moving place to place and it will be hard progress for them to adapt to the new place. they are not flexible with changing their town and even their home. For example, my youngest child, "Anna" does not like to sleep in other houses even her grandmom's house. she has to sleep in her room. she loves our house and she doesn't want to change our house because she has a lot of good memories here with her father. this example demonstrates how valuable our place is for my daughter.
In conclusion, I prefer living in one town for the rest of my life for many reasons which I told just two of them in the essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28488372093 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39485007735 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462209302326 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7790495416 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7058823529 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205140740627 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812490663862 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721086901216 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138154986674 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00841435136418 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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