Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
living in this century is more easier than one handred years ago. In my point of view life today is better than past, so I'm completely agree with this idea. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay,
First of all, in my opinion Internet had a big impact on people lives. with internet we are more comfortable than any other times. we can use internet for our daily works or be update and knows all the news around the world and also internet gives us more idea and help us to be more productive. For example internet gives
companies idea that they can improve their apps quality, so they invent videocall for social media applications and gives their customers apportunity to make a video call to their family and friends who are in another city or country. and one of advantage of this invent is it help us to contorol our feelings and not be so much sad for distance between us and people who we care about. this example demonstrates how important internet can be.
Secondly, Nowadays goverments try to provide more and better equipment for us as a result, we have all basic needs and even more. we are not concern about distance between our house and work office like our grandparents because we have several choices to go to work like using buses or subway or taxies. These equipement have directly effect on our life and by access to good equipment we can live better, build a good life for our family and gives our children choice to live piecefully and follow their dreams. we know by spending time and going forward intellegence people invent stuff that help us to raise our life quality that these intellegence people can be you or your children who lives in a good situation and have access to whatever they need.
in conclusion, I strongly believe that living in this centurary is more pleasent and comfortable than living in one handred years ago that our grandparents lived. we have premmision to live more comfortable
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
| 2023-06-04 | nph | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-17 | sadasr | 73 | view |
| 2023-04-05 | Dat_Nguyen | 70 | view |
| 2023-01-20 | theprasad | 71 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
living in this century is more easier than one...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
living in this century is more easier than one handred years ago. In my point...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...view life today is better than past, so Im completely agree with this idea. I feel...
^^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay, ...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will explore in the following essay, First of all, in my opinion Internet had...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ernet had a big impact on people lives. with internet we are more comfortable than a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... more comfortable than any other times. we can use internet for our daily works or...
^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ds who are in another city or country. and one of advantage of this invent is it h...
^^^
Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...etween us and people who we care about. this example demonstrates how important inte...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ates how important internet can be. Secondly, Nowadays goverments try to pro...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... we have all basic needs and even more. we are not concern about distance between ...
^^
Line 6, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ive piecefully and follow their dreams. we know by spending time and going forward...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...d have access to whatever they need. in conclusion, I strongly believe that liv...
^^
Line 8, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... years ago that our grandparents lived. we have premmision to live more comfortabl...
^^
Line 8, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have premmision to live more comfortable
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67806267806 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46014324182 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51566951567 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4589822464 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158645552461 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722045393512 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603782659193 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100995178667 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062627137319 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.