Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline for several reasons.
First, the increased use of ethanol fuel would not help tosolve one of the biggest environmental problems caused by gasoline use: global warming. Like gasoline, ethanol releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere when it is burned for fuel and carbon dioxide is greenhouse gas: it helps trap heat in the atmosphere. Thus, ethanol offers no environmental advantage over gasoline.
Second, the production of significant amounts of ethanol would dramatically reduce the amount of plants available for uses other fuel. For example, much of the corn now grown in the United States is used to feed farm animals such as cows and chickens. It is estimated that if ethanol were used to satisfy just 10 percent of the fuel needs in the United States, more than 60 percent of the corn currently grown in the united stated would have to be used to produce ethanol. If most of the corn were used to produce ethanol, a substantial source of food for animals would disappear.
Third, ethanol fuel will never be able to compete with gasoline on price. Although the prices of ethanol and gasoline for the consumer are currently about the same, this is only because of the help in the form of tax subsidies given to ethanol producers by the United States government. These tax subsidies have cost the United States government over $11 billion in the past 30 years. If the United States government were to stop helping producers in this way, the price of ethanol would increase greatly.
social media take away relationships?
this is the most dramatic question among people that say social media can take away relationships, if you mulled it over you would understand that every now and then it can affect some relationships but, sometimes not, follow these steps.
Firstly, social media is figurative relationships among most of the people that utilize it, social media (figurative virtual) can get people around face to face meeting, not only would their camaraderie situation hurt but also, they wouldn’t know them selves for prospective therefore, social media can change people’s treating, they wouldn’t be that best and brightest one that used to be every thing among them would be altered.
Secondly, social media can do bad things on people’s lives by the virtue of that, they wouldn’t do those things that used to do. for example, helping each others, have ever thought that why native people used to enhance each others that was what that the were richer and had affluent economic? Or, have you ever thought that why we are poor now(even don’t have that mean to pass our days)? Actually if we think about this all of these are related to our treatment and the issue that eliminate all the cores to inhibit this malicious situation is social media.
Thirdly, social media is making people hate their family day in and day out in their daily lives, occasionally, you would be caught off guard that why your parents don’t take care about you all of these come to social media, another hurt of social media. To my knowledge, all the time social media isn’t a bad thing, sometimes it can soothe you when you don’t pay much money to have the access to fans, sometimes it can help you that do every thing that you like in your life by figurative virtual, like: some online jobs, online studies(don’t pay a lot money to face to face classes), online working and etc. To be foolproof about your time and life, this is an outright thing that can so good things.
To recapitulate, try to cut off this dim this way to back of my idea get around this is reluctant situation this isn’t what is said by me this is according a quest, so social media isn’t amazing thing not bad thing(the less to use it the more would have time with your family), it should be used not too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 22.412803532 290% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1373.03311258 139% => OK
No of words: 405.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72098765432 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40129772363 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.467984033 49.2860985944 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.818181818 110.228320801 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8181818182 21.698381199 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0386125838311 0.272083759551 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189317855758 0.0996497079465 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196131863598 0.0662205650399 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0213858929561 0.162205337803 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163687586596 0.0443174109184 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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