Genetically modification trees
The articles state that Genetic modification trees can have some advantages which help humanity to have more comfortable life otherwise The lecture explains some benefits and problems of genetic modification trees which can faced us with recondite problems and also faced us with not any problems.
Firstly, the article states genetically modification tress give more fruits and it can grow faster than natural tress in a short time which help to the economy. As you know in lecture genetically modification trees have more resistant to the natural condition in plant life. For instance, consider a kind of climate change which should kill tress in a session condition but these kind of genetically modificated trees will be stable and instead of having walted flowers have fresh flowers so, they can hurt the environment eventually instead of winter we faced spring for along time.
The second one is paying more money for genetically modificated trees while having trees in a usual condition doesn’t cost. Finally, these kind of trees with altered humanity will be so expensive that cause lack of trees in the environment due to its payment so just rich people can have trees in their home or their garden.
The third problem is that the genetically modification trees are stronger than other trees so eventually inter to compete with the local wild trees and in resources. So, genetically modificated trees uses more nutrient that natural wild tress that it will be harmful for the plant environment.
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- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people. 50
- Genetically modification trees 75
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. 66
- Unlike great thinkers and great artists, the most effective political leaders must often yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: for a long time
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Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
...y instead of winter we faced spring for along time. The second one is paying more money f...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...l condition doesn't cost. Finally, these kind of trees with altered humanity will be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, third, while, for instance, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15447154472 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70225851295 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3087477102 49.2860985944 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5 110.228320801 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 21.698381199 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06452816374 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512007641872 0.272083759551 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.300336579279 0.0996497079465 301% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114166947516 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.382838591159 0.162205337803 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745013511659 0.0443174109184 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.3589403974 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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