government is implementing higher taxes on cigarettes
The reading is about implementing higher tax rates on cigarettes and unhealthy foods. The lecturer challenges the points made by the author and she thinks that it's very damaging to people's health and also ruins them financially in order to make the government rich which can be explored in the following essay.
First of all, the reading states that imposing higher taxes on cigarettes and unhealthy foods can make people back from their unhealthy habits and obesity respectively. However, the professor states that by increasing taxes on cigarettes makes people buy much cheaper quality cigarettes which contain highly carcinogenic agents than high prices cigarettes. Additionally, she mentions that when there more taxes on unhealthy products people won't stop buying them instead they will be left with a little amount of money which might be helpful for them in several means. This clearly shows that implementing higher taxes are not going to make people healthier.
Furthermore, the author says that collecting taxes from all the people equally is fair enough because they can be saved and used when they are in need of medical purposes. On the other hand, the lecturer posits that some people argue that these taxes are unfair because when a person smokes a pack of cigarettes a day then even the low-income people are suffering in paying these taxes. This clearly illustrates that it will affect low-income people seriously.
Finally, the reading mentions that cigarettes increase the revenue of the government and also can be used for the public in various projects they build. The professor refutes this and explains that this point has a serious downside. On top of it, she states that the government will depend on these taxes and also they don't want to lose it in the long run. she also adds that the government is not being forceful on people to eliminate habits by keeping the billboard or any flyer at public parks and many private spaces like "DO NOT SMOKE" or "SMOKING KILLS", because they don't want to lose income. From this, we can figure that the government instead of making people aware of harmful products they are not taking any measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...nd she thinks that its very damaging to peoples health and also ruins them financially ...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ill depend on these taxes and also they dont want to lose it in the long run. she al...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...y dont want to lose it in the long run. she also adds that the government is not be...
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Line 7, column 595, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...'SMOKING KILLS', because they dont want to lose income. From this, we can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, then, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 361.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07202216066 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55762239384 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515235457064 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3271911246 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.785714286 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288052230067 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116845420401 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115940435398 0.0662205650399 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189683126096 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829252937082 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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