It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea?
Some people believe that success is the most important thing; however,others think that being happy and optimistic is more important. There has always been a controversial debate on whether being successful or happy is more beneficial for people. I personally think that people can benefit more from having an optimistic personality. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First, failure is inevitable and everyone has experienced at least one failure during his life, so it is very important to be capable during our failures and continue our lives. Being optimistic, lets people have a desire and put a lot of effort in to try again for their goals. For example, my sister is very optimistic and once she lost her job, she was still happy and tried even more to find a better job. After some months, she could finally be hired by a reputed company with a higher income than before. She could be successful in finding a new job because every day she tried hard and explored every company for recruiting with an optimistic perspective.
Second, undoubtedly achieving success makes people happy and satisfied. On the other hand, if someone could not be as successful as he wants, he would feel depressed and give up trying. In that case, the people are anxious about their future, and they can not even concentrate on their daily activities. As a result, society will face many problems because there are many people living there who are struggling with psychological issues and suffering from depression and anxiety. For example, some years ago my cousin established his own business and his company did not work well and he underwent a lot of loans and closed her company. Unestly, he got depressed and could never try again to build his own business because he believed that he would fail again. If he had been optimistic, he would have been able to establish his company and provide profit not only for himself but also for his society by hiring employees and increasing employment rate.
In conclusion, although some people believe that having success is more important, I strongly believe that people can benefit from having a optimistic view. Not only do not they give up tying more, but also they would never suffer from depression and psychological disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, at least, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 7.30242825607 301% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1373.03311258 140% => OK
No of words: 390.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91282051282 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63340199147 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 145.348785872 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7534526218 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171602350698 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060677407857 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764220033202 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123360389415 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667945180447 0.0443174109184 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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