At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in some countries the number of young people is much more than elderly people and this situation can have both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, more benefits can be provided by a higher population of young adults in compare with old ones in a society.
One of the most significant advantages of young population is that the country can develop faster because almost all young workers are so energetic and productive. In other words, these people are more motivated and enthusiastic to have a tough and difficult job. Furthermore, they usually come with fresh ideas and are free from traditional beliefs. For example, the founder of Facebook is a relatively young man with endless creative ideas. The other pros of populated young generation in a society can be considered as a healthier society. In fact, the number of people with health problems decreases and the government can have less expenditure on healthcare system and allocate more budget on other areas such as improving infrastructures.
The main drawbacks of having more young adults in a nation can be the lack of skilled workers who have years of experience. These skillful persons can work efficiently and they also know how a task can be done correctly and without a problem. For instance, when the workers face a crucial issue in the workplace, the first and best way to find a solution would be asking a high-experienced person. It helps them to spend less time to figure out how to solve the problem themselves.
In conclusion, although larger population of young adults in a country can be a double-edged sword, I think the advantages of young population outweigh the disadvantages and results in society develops faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97179518741 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3704737144 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263912679385 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925454024725 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853637126081 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187522718304 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101242311599 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.