The reading and the lecture are both about the possibility of human presence in Venus. The author of the reading feels that human cannot stay on Venus. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. He is of the opinion that it is possible to stay in Venus.
To begin with, the author argues that it is impossible to live in Venus, because of the atmosphere pressure. The article mentions that the atmosphere pressure in Venus is greater than the earth’s. It means creatures can be crushed down by the strength of the pressure. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that it is possible to live in Venus if we float 50 kilometers higher from the atmosphere. Additionally, he said that the pressure of the place that is 50 kilometers higher from the atmosphere is equal to the pressure of the earth’s.
Secondly, the writer suggests that there is no enough water and oxygen . Mostly the compounds found in Venus are carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that it is possible to make water and oxygen by combining compounds. As we read, the atmosphere in Venus is made of different compounds such as carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid.
Finally, the author posits that the humans cannot live in Venus because there is little sunlight reaching Venus because of the thick clouds. In contrast, the lecturer’s position is the humans can live in Venus by floating 50 kilometers from the atmosphere. He notes that the clouds above are thinner. Hence, we can receive enough sunlight up there. Moreover, with this sunlight, we can make electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...feels that human cannot stay on Venus. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that there is no enough water and oxygen . Mostly the compounds found in Venus ar...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his sunlight, we can make electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 277.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67249725957 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4440433213 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8702942852 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8947368421 110.228320801 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151663147912 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505458957643 0.0996497079465 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529071280746 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962895300945 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456294012881 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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