model of a paiting
In this set of materials, the reading and listening both discuss the well known masterpiece " Girl with a pearl earring" by Johannes Vermeer. The article strongly postulates the speculations for the model of the famous painting, and endorses three theories to express th model's idenitification.However, the lecture mentions that theories depicted in the reading are unconvincing and have certain drawbacks and, gainsays each of them.
The first and foremost, the writer begins by assering that First probable figure would be Vermeer's oldest daughter due to the dact that Vermeer is greatly ispired by the daily life scenario.So he would had choosen her daughter as a model for painting. On the other hand, the lecturer dissmisses this point by insisting that portrait could not be his daughter, it could be anyother person around depending on possibilty that he was influenced with the mundane life scenes.Moreover, for Vermeer, subject had mattered the most and was not confined to particular figure. He examplifies that 40 other portrays depicted the portrays of females , anyone could be his daughter from them.
Furthermore, The lecturer posits that model for the GIrl with a pearl could not be Van Ruijven"daughter. Judging from the conservative features of the portrait. To be more specific, Vermeer had good relations with the Ruijeven and in the past portraits were not about likeness of figure, but it depicted the images of prides and social class. If Vermeer portraid his Patron"s daughter he would have Showed upscale classrather than unconventional clothing.These claims clealy refutes the writer implication that model could be Daughter his patron, of Ruijven because he was in close proximity and her daughter got the painting as her wedding gift.
Ultimately, the writer wraps up the arguments by contending that key characteristicts such as exxaggeration, of famous portray matched with the Tronie, a hit genre of 1700.Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes an issue with that by contending that thouigh exaggeration expression were dominated in Tronie portarys. But vermeer never painted others portrait unless he observed them personally. Moreover he had not drawed imaginary figures and objects.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...es to express th models idenitification.However, the lecture mentions that theories dep...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Vermeers the oldest'.
Suggestion: Vermeers the oldest
...ing that First probable figure would be Vermeers oldest daughter due to the dact that Vermeer i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...atly ispired by the daily life scenario.So he would had choosen her daughter as a ...
^^
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... by the daily life scenario.So he would had choosen her daughter as a model for pai...
^^^
Line 2, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...influenced with the mundane life scenes.Moreover, for Vermeer, subject had mattered the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 637, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ortrays depicted the portrays of females , anyone could be his daughter from them....
^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...lassrather than unconventional clothing.These claims clealy refutes the writer implic...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...is patron, of Ruijven because he was in close proximity and her daughter got the painting as he...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...ed with the Tronie, a hit genre of 1700.Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes an iss...
^^^
Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...nie portarys. But vermeer never painted others portrait unless he observed them person...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ait unless he observed them personally. Moreover he had not drawed imaginary figures and...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 346.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46242774566 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24015697351 2.5805825403 126% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.403733607 49.2860985944 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.5 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110689487362 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696812612246 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109997602376 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716618538486 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485670352001 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.3589403974 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 63.6247240618 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...es to express th models idenitification.However, the lecture mentions that theories dep...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Vermeers the oldest'.
Suggestion: Vermeers the oldest
...ing that First probable figure would be Vermeers oldest daughter due to the dact that Vermeer i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...atly ispired by the daily life scenario.So he would had choosen her daughter as a ...
^^
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... by the daily life scenario.So he would had choosen her daughter as a model for pai...
^^^
Line 2, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...influenced with the mundane life scenes.Moreover, for Vermeer, subject had mattered the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 637, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ortrays depicted the portrays of females , anyone could be his daughter from them....
^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...lassrather than unconventional clothing.These claims clealy refutes the writer implic...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...is patron, of Ruijven because he was in close proximity and her daughter got the painting as he...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...ed with the Tronie, a hit genre of 1700.Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes an iss...
^^^
Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...nie portarys. But vermeer never painted others portrait unless he observed them person...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ait unless he observed them personally. Moreover he had not drawed imaginary figures and...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 346.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46242774566 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24015697351 2.5805825403 126% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.403733607 49.2860985944 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.5 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110689487362 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696812612246 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109997602376 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716618538486 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485670352001 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.3589403974 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 63.6247240618 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.