The passage and lecture both talk about replacement of ethanol fuel to gasoline in United States. The writer claims three reasons to argue that ethanol is not a good replacement to gasoline. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He mentions, these reasons are inconvenience.
First, the author states, using ethanol does not solve problem of global warming, Because, ethanol also release carbon dioxide to atmosphere like gasoline. The lecturer refutes this notion. He suggests, ethanol derived from plants like corn, so increase growing of these plants will reduce carbon dioxide in air, since these plants used this gas in photosynthesis process to make their food. As a result using ethanol as fuel lead to increase planting of corn . Therefore carbon dioxide will decrease,
Second, the author says, using ethanol as fuel will decrease corn. This plant used as food for many animals. This point is challenged by professor. He elaborate on celleliod part which is present in plant cell wall. He says ethanol is made from this celeiloid part which is not used by animal as nutrition. That explain, using corn to make ethanol does not interfere with animal feeding'
Finally, the passage contents, ethanol price dose not compete with gasoline price. They are actually the same. The lecturer in the other hand points out. when government support using of ethanol as fuel. The producer will increase production of ethanol. Therefore, it price will decrease, because government make its price cheaper.
The passage and lecture both talk about replacement of ethanol fuel to gasoline in United States. The writer claims three resons to argue that ethaol is not a good replacement to gasoline. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He mentions, these reasons are inconvenience.
First, the author statesusing ethanol does not solve problem of global warming,Because, ethanol also release carbon dioxide to atmospher like gasoline. The lecturer refutes this notion. He suggests, ethanol derived from plants like corn, so increse growing of these plants will reduce carbon dioxide in air, since these plants used this gas in photosynthesis process to make their food. As aresult using ethanol as fuel lead to increase planting of corn . Therefore carbon dioxide will decrease,
Second, the author says, using ethanol as fuel will decrease corn. This plant used as food for many animals. This point is challenged by professor. He elaborate on celleliod part which is present in plant cell wall. He says ethanol is made from this celliloid part which is not used by animal as nutrition. That explain, using corn to make ethanol does not interfere with animal feeding'
Finally, the passage contents, ethanol price dose not compete with gasoline price. They are actualy the same. The lecturer in the other hand points out. when government support using of ethanol as fuel. The producer will increase production of ethanol. Therefore, it price will decrease, because government make it;s price cheaper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is not a good replacement to gasoline. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Because
...does not solve problem of global warming,Because, ethanol also release carbon dioxide to...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., ethanol derived from plants like corn, so increse growing of these plants will ...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s fuel lead to increase planting of corn . Therefore carbon dioxide will decrease,...
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Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...uel lead to increase planting of corn . Therefore carbon dioxide will decrease, Second,...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... lecturer in the other hand points out. when government support using of ethanol as ...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prices'?
Suggestion: prices
...se production of ethanol. Therefore, it price will decrease, because government make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 241.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2489626556 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56411867835 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1122311812 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5789473684 110.228320801 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6842105263 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.26315789474 7.06452816374 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340406689543 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112218774762 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132041906604 0.0662205650399 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262545478917 0.162205337803 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.257363570752 0.0443174109184 581% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.