Pterosaurs
The passage mentioned that pterosaurs are were not capable to powered flight because it is cold-blooded, to heavy to stay in the air, and unable to take off. But the lecture disagrees with that.
In the beginning, the passage talks about one reason why Pterosaurs can’t fly, which is it is cold-blooded, and they don’t have enough energy to fly. But the lecture states that, there are hair that were found that belongs to Pterosaurs, this proves that Pterosaurs are actually warm-blooded animals, because only warm-blooded animals have hair. And if this was true , then Pterosaurs do have enough energy to fly.
After proving the first point wrong, the lecture move on to the second point the passage talks about, which is Pterosaurs is too heavy to stay in the air. The lecture states that Pterosaurs have hollow bones which makes them very light. So, Pterosaurs can be able to fly.
At last, the passage claims that Pterosaurs was not able to fly because it cannot take off from the ground like a bird. The lecture, however, states that Pterosaurs use both two legs and two hands to take off, just like bats, if Pterosaurs use all four legs, it will be well enough to take off.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage mentioned that pterosaurs ar...
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Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...e passage mentioned that pterosaurs are were not capable to powered flight because i...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... animals have hair. And if this was true , then Pterosaurs do have enough energy t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rosaurs do have enough energy to fly. After proving the first point wrong, the...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht. So, Pterosaurs can be able to fly. At last, the passage claims that Pterosa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 207.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40733880884 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541062801932 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4516906866 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391302374239 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181270938264 0.0996497079465 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07657816999 0.0662205650399 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251080023374 0.162205337803 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059963517411 0.0443174109184 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.42419426049 79% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 63.6247240618 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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