Question : Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
The reading and the lecture are both about the story of the Burning mirror. The author feels that the burning mirror is just a story. The lecturer challenges the claim made by the author. He is of the opinion that the author's thoughts are unconvincing.
To begin with, the author argues that ancient Greeks were not technologically advanced to make that big mirror. The article mentions that the technology of producing a large sheet of copper with specific requirements did not exist then. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He feels that they did not need large copper to make the mirror. Additionally, he said that they needed only small pieces of copper.
Secondly, the writer suggests that it should take a long time to set the fire of the ships. In the article, it is mentioned that it required 10 minutes to collect the rays on a wooden target on 30 meters distance while the object is moving. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that the ships were made with wood and different subjects that made it quicker to fire the ships in a few seconds even if the ship was moving
Finally, the author posits that it was not an improvement in a weapon that the Greeks already had like a flaming arrow. Moreover. in the article, it is stated that the mirror and flaming arrows had the same use and effective to burn the ships. In contrast, the lecturer's positions are that the enemy would not see a fire, just a mirror. As a result, it would be more surprising to the enemies which
he notes that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat the burning mirror is just a story. The lecturer challenges the claim made by t...
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Line 13, column 121, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...reeks already had like a flaming arrow. Moreover. in the article, it is stated that the ...
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Line 13, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ady had like a flaming arrow. Moreover. in the article, it is stated that the mirr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, while, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65201465201 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4856442202 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.5824573989 49.2860985944 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083611494446 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282149502778 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317565524572 0.0662205650399 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477995966115 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190672673514 0.0443174109184 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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